Helloooo,
Im really getting into writing these days. I mean like, I write loads. If ever my books get published, its not the fame I want. its not the money either, or anything lik that... its so that people can enjoy what I create for them. Its like, im the magician which can give dreams to millions of readers. I know that its not simple and ther is deadlines and all that type of stuff, and mainly getting high hopes, but everyone is suporting me doing this. My teachers give me publishers address and they encourage me loads, my friends constantly keep giving me ideas and my parents check my work and tell me if something doesnt work, and with all this help, I know i can make it get to the top.
Thank you,
Louise.
My vampire life
My name is Atlantia. I am 13. Or rather 450 years old. Frozen. Into the darkness of time. No body understands me. Nobody cares for me. In my mortal life, I was an orphan. I would work hard in the coal mines. My brother Nathan named me this beautiful name. After the seas and oceans, he used to say. He was 14. But one day, some people came and took him away. I screamed and pulled and told them to leave him alone. But I was small and was not strong enough. He held my hand in his and whispered beautiful words, while a tear rolled down his cheek. He gave me one unforgettable kiss on my forehead, his smell of coal which was a familiar scent, went away. He was gone. Forever. That was the last time I saw him in my human life. But I knew I would always love him forever.
After that I would trail in the cobbled stone streets. Passer byes never glanced at me. In the cold winters |I would snuggle up as hard as I could, the wind and snow blowing hard on my face. In the summer, I would try and sell invaluable things, such as pansies and roses. Sometimes I would get enough to eat a piece of bread, or when no one would buy, my stomach would rumble and hurt. My teeth would ache, my head felt heavy and my muscles strained. But I lived my life as best and fully as I could, with only one thing in mind: Find and live with Nathan one day, and forever, until we both died.
One night, as I was starving and cold in the deep cold snow, an odd passer by stopped in front of me. I looked at the dark shadow. It slowly crept towards me. I was too tired too run away. I was an easy prey.
And so, I was bit. And those were my last second of human life. If the police would have not been passing by, than I would have died. But they did and the dark shadow flee to who knows where. And so I was left there, pain flaring into my veins and blood, as I was becoming... The creature of the night. The eternal darkness. I hunted the nights, and kept away from the day with effort, scared and feared that I was seen and burned. But I was able to walk all night, and I traveled to France through the channel. I would take a boat, unseen, and would prey on the crew
When I got to France, I would feed on the poor farmers. I did not want to... But It was my only choice. I met, on my way, a coven. They were not very welcoming, but together we traveled to Paris. I searched everywhere for my Nathan. By the time I had figured out why and by who he had been taken. He had to go work in a special orphanage in France, Paris, and was take by the owners of the working houses.
The only thing I thought about was to save him... and even make him one of me. To start a coven of my own. So I searched all Paris, and found the working house. At night I crept in, the smell of sweat and hard work came back to me. I found him lying on a thin mattress shivering from the cold. I woke him up, and when his eyes met mine his lips curved up into the most beautiful smile and his sad eyes beamed.
We went into the darkness of the streets and ran away, far into the country side. When it was finally morning and he woke up, we were next to bay stale, on the fresh new grass, the smell of the countryside overwhelmed us, as the bright blue sky had never been so blue and the chirping of the birds filled the air.
I told him what I was. He did not fear me or run away, he stayed at my side, his warm body next to mine.
`Nathan,` I said `Will you want to stay with me forever?` I chanted. His green eyes looked at me and I looked at him.
`Forever` He said. And so, I bit him, most delicately. I did my best for it not to be too painful. His eyes soon changed from green to red, his skin from pink to gray, his warmth from hot to cold... But too me, he was still my Nathan. I could see it was painful, but I knew it would soon stop, and there my eternal darkness was replaced by a flame. A flame so small, but its warmth spread all over.
We lived together, never separated. We shared our secret. Forever and ever.
The End
sábado, 25 de dezembro de 2010
segunda-feira, 29 de novembro de 2010
Vampire text
Hello twilight fans,
I have been working on a text. more specifically a vampire text. People that have read it condsider it sad.
I have posted it on:
http://www.coolest-vampire-art-gallery.com/
A very good site which I recomend.
For more info contact me:
loulou.tadif@hotmail.com
or comment
Below!
I have been working on a text. more specifically a vampire text. People that have read it condsider it sad.
I have posted it on:
http://www.coolest-vampire-art-gallery.com/
A very good site which I recomend.
For more info contact me:
loulou.tadif@hotmail.com
or comment
Below!
quarta-feira, 17 de novembro de 2010
So I was really suprised by Breaking Dawn. I especially loved the part where bella is a vampire in the 3rd book. I love this part because its as if you were acctualy the vampire which makes it even better!
Etiquetas:
3rd book,
breaking,
dawn,
mrs.cullen,
vamires
segunda-feira, 21 de dezembro de 2009
Hi twilight fans!!! Today for lunch I invited the Docter Cullen and his family. I had everything prepared of course: I served them blood. Dr Cullen drank his really quickly (I wonder for how much time he didn't eat?). Esmeé drank it elegantly, not wanting to disturb me. Doctor Cullen and I are working on a very special project. I invited them to stay for a while.
sexta-feira, 18 de dezembro de 2009
Hi twilight fans!!! I just anted to show some lines of my book! Here we go!:
My Brothers And I
Chapter 1
I woke up early in the morning. It was still and fogy outside of the window. I turned my head back. I closed my eyes for some moments.
My name is Erma Lilura. I am twelve. I have blond hair which has this wave at the end. My eyes are light blue and full of spirit. No really I’m not being vain! I have three brothers, Jack, William and Charles.
Actually this is just one tenth of my chapter!!! Please comment below! :)
XXX
My Brothers And I
Chapter 1
I woke up early in the morning. It was still and fogy outside of the window. I turned my head back. I closed my eyes for some moments.
My name is Erma Lilura. I am twelve. I have blond hair which has this wave at the end. My eyes are light blue and full of spirit. No really I’m not being vain! I have three brothers, Jack, William and Charles.
Actually this is just one tenth of my chapter!!! Please comment below! :)
XXX
sábado, 12 de dezembro de 2009
Hi twilight fans! Today I am goin to share a video with you.
http://www.youtube.com/100percentTwilight#p/f/6/dp4FiMazQYY
By the way: The video is on my channel as you can see!
http://www.youtube.com/100percentTwilight#p/f/6/dp4FiMazQYY
By the way: The video is on my channel as you can see!
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